Personal profile Autoformació 1
Who am I?
I’m a shy and lonley(lonely) person, so I
prefer to be alone and do my thing because I have few difficulties to speak
with other people, even with my friends. Otherwise, I can be very friendly if
you meet(get to know) me for (a) long.
I usually get up early every day, at the weekends too,
at 07:05am, (I don’t like o’clock times) then I have (a) breakfast.
Later, I normally go for a walk with my dog. We like walking a lot. When I get
home, I always do exercise and then I have all the morning free. My hobbies
are; read(ing), I read a lot of books, play(ing) computer games, I spent(d)
one or two hours a day (for) playing, I also like write(ing), I’m always
writing. Sometimes I play the guitar too. I like to study everything what(that)
I can by myself.
I would to write at least one book in my life, study
two, three or more careers(I’d like to obtain several university
degrees) (I like knowledge, so It doesn’t matter a lot what careers(studies)
I’ll do(choose)). My perfect job will be in a science lab, I love
chemistry.
Narrative essay in the past Autoformació 2
A disastrous experience
Last summer, I got my first part-time job as a cook at
a restaurant. I’ve(I’d) never cooked before, all was new.
First, I learnt to do(how to make) the salads
and then the main plates(courses). One day, I was peeling some potatoes
and a customer ordered a steak. My co-worker was on his break so I was alone
and scared. I tried to do my best. After five minutes searching(for) the beef
in the fridge started to cook it. The steak was burning on the grill when the
chef came in. He started to yelling me(yell at me) and did(made)
the steak himself.
Next(The following day) day, I was
walking toward(to) work when my boss phoned me, He told me that I was
fired.
Thanks for your contributions, Sergi. By the way, in the first essay, when it says: "I would to write at least one book in my life", you're missing a verb. It should be: "I would like to write...". And in the econd essay, instead of: " After five minutes searching(for) the beef in the fridge started to cook it.", it would be clearer if you said:"After five minutes searching for the beef I found it and started to cook it".
ResponderEliminarCongratulations on your hard work.
Keep it up!